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xtremeroswellia ([personal profile] xtremeroswellia) wrote2006-04-26 06:45 pm

My Last Breath (Prologue/?)



Title: My Last Breath (Prologue/?)
Author: X_tremeroswellian
Email: adwilliams03@yahoo.com
Disclaimer: Yeah, they’re not mine. I wish, though. *sigh*
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to and including “Splinter.” This takes the place of “Solitude.” Some of the stuff will be a bit familiar, but most of it is my mind taking over.
Summary: Chloe proves to Clark how important he is to her, and to the world.
Author’s Note: Whatever you’re thinking about this story…I can pretty much guarantee that you’re wrong. So just bear with me. You all know how much I love Chloe. The song is “My Last Breath” by Evanescence.

Prologue | One | Two | Three | Four | Conclusion


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My Last Breath (Prologue)

Safe inside myself
Are all my thoughts of you
Sweet raptured light
It ends here tonight


“Stay with me,” Clark whispered urgently, cradling her small, frail body in his arms as he knelt on the frozen Fortress ground.

“You’re okay,” she murmured, relief clear despite how strained her voice was.

“I’m gonna get you to a hospital.” He swallowed hard, a tear trickling down his cheek.

“They can’t help me.” She slowly opened her eyes and looked at him. “It’s okay, Clark.”

“No, it’s not,” he choked out, shaking his head.

A faint, but sad smile touched her lips. “I love you.” Despite how weak she was, despite how quickly what was left of her life force was draining from her, she managed to reach up and touch his cheek. Her hazel eyes glittered with tears. “It’s always been you, Clark.”

“Don’t leave me. Please,” he whispered, cradling her closer to him. “I need you.” Without thinking about it, he gently pressed his lips to hers.

Her eyes drifted shut and she kissed him back softly as she felt the world slowly slipping from her grasp. Her hand dropped away from his face and hung limply at her side.

“Chloe! No! Chloe! Wake up!” He shook her gently, pressed his ear against her heart. Sorrow unlike anything he’d ever felt before ripped through him. “NOOOOOOO!” he screamed, her lifeless body pressed against his chest.

And then the world went black.

[identity profile] ferdalump.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
WHAT?!

~dies~

OMG! I need more NOW! You told me it's not what I thought. Bring her back! Find another crystal!! OMG!!!!!! Ack!

(But beautiful writing :) )

[identity profile] xtremeroswellia.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
Hehehe...it isn't what you think. ;) Just breathe. :D Thanks for the review! :D

[identity profile] snowflakespeech.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
*Glares* *clears throat* Excuse me? What happened to your aversion to BCD? Huh?

[identity profile] xtremeroswellia.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
Come on, Joanith. You *really* think I'd kill off Chloe and keep her dead? *gives you a you should know better look*

[identity profile] etoilefilante.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
*wails* So, you're bringing her back, yeah? Now-ish?

Maybe this'll give Clark the kick he needs... :D

[identity profile] xtremeroswellia.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
Heh...fear not. All is not what it seems. I promise. Thanks for the review. :D

[identity profile] monicaop.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
Why is that you always manage to make me want to cry?? Please just tell me this is a dream or something!!! We need Chloe!!! Let us wake up!!! Oh... and please write more as soon as you can ;). Tell your muse that this just rocks :D.

Hugs, be well and take care, Monica

[identity profile] xtremeroswellia.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
I promise that it is not what it seems. It'll be okay, I promise. *hugs* Thanks for the review.

[identity profile] super-robyn.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent song choice! I love the prologue to this story, pleaaaase update soon. Chloe better be okay! *wags finger*

[identity profile] xtremeroswellia.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
I LOVE Evanescence...this particular song is actually what inspired the entire idea behind this fic yesterday. :D Glad you like it so far...have no fears. You know I love Chloe. :)
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[identity profile] rigel-7.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
*sniffles*

Now update and bring her back!

[identity profile] xtremeroswellia.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't worry. ;) Thanks for the review!

[identity profile] kissme-myfool.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 07:13 am (UTC)(link)
great start, sad but great :)

[identity profile] xtremeroswellia.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank ya! :D

[identity profile] guitarsrawesome.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
-pokes-

You evil person, you!

How did you leave it there? It's just not humanly possible!

-gasps-

You're from Krypton, aren't you? That would explain so much. . .

[identity profile] xtremeroswellia.livejournal.com 2006-04-27 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
lmao...you're right. I'm evil. *evil grin* Mwhahaha!